Paris vignettes - 2 poems

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By donna bamford

The Jardin de Luxembourg

Best in the winter

With a lush cover of snow

The donkey carts

The children full of joy

And then in summer

The tables dappled with sunshine

Through the leaves

Of the sycamore trees

As I write a letter home

And then to the palais

So ornate

So finely appointed

The senate chambers

Where once lived kings and queens

But I shall remember best

The children riding the donkey carts

And their glee

One snow-brimmed day in Paris


The Eiffel Tower

But I first saw it

As a Christmas tree

Shining and giving light

The winter I embarked

On my  expedition to Paris

And it backoned me

As I entreed by the Seine

From the north

Sur bateau bleu

So overwhelming

An exquisite structure

Humorous and gay

Witty and elegant

To the top

With a Swiss friend

In a lightning storm

All the more dramatic

Touristic

But then we were tourists

Il vaut le coup!

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RedElf Level 7 Commenter 13 months ago

Breathtaking images!

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Twilight Lawns Level 7 Commenter 13 months ago

Your poetry is so evocatively sublime... so sublimely evocative. I think it was Doug the other day, who said your poetry makes him want to travel... and I am only just across le Manche, and haven't been to Paris for years. You bring that lovely city to our doorsteps.

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donna bamford Hub Author 13 months ago

Thanks Twilight but when I reread this I think it is still pretty cliched and needs work. One day soon I'll get back to them. I'll try to write a really good one next. Thanks again!

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